Matthew Toffolo: What is your screenplay about?
Montgomery Burt: During an early morning trip on the commuter train, a good samaritan tries to help a naive young woman seemingly headed for trouble but she doesn’t want his help.
2. What genres does your screenplay fall under?
3. Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?
The interaction between the two main characters reflects what’s going on in life—young people not questioning what may be an “opportunity” they found on the internet.
4. How would you describe this script in two words?
5. What movie have you seen the most times in your life?
North by Northwest.
6. How long have you been working on this screenplay?
A few months. About five drafts.
7. How many stories have you written?
Many. I’ve been writing since I was fourteen.
8. What is your favorite song? (Or, what song have you listened to the most times in your life?)
I have hundreds of CDs with thousands of songs but my favorite is Los Super Seven’s debut album.
9. What obstacles did you face to finish this screenplay?
Having it workshopped at my screenwriters group, Upwords. It’s a true story so I tried to work within the confines of what actually happened and still make it dramatic and interesting. Three of my colleagues, when they were younger, got into creepy situations with photographers and they explained why they overlooked any danger for the prospect of fame.
10. Apart from writing, what else are you passionate about?
Music, movies, travel, volunteering at our local animal shelter. I team up with directors to make shorts. Here is our most recent, a short comedy directed by Tabatha Golat called “The United Guys Network.”
This is the proposal for our next project:
11. You entered your screenplay via FilmFreeway. What has been your experiences working with the submission platform site?
Excellent. It’s easy use and quite dependable with notifications. Service is good, too. When I informed them of a possible scam festival, for example, they looked into the matter right away.
12. What influenced you to enter the festival? What were your feelings on the initial feedback you received?
I wanted the challenge of writing a short script with few characters and limited locations.
The written feedback I received was excellent.
Watch the Screenplay Reading:
During an early morning trip on the commuter train, a good samaritan tries to help a naive young woman seemingly headed for trouble but she doesn’t want his help.
Automated voice – 2 – OLIVIA BARRETT
NARRATION – JUSTIN DESOUZA
Sean – 24 – DANIEL JONES
Carly – 21 – CASSANDRA GUTHRIE